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The Critic's Toolkit: Lit The Critic's Toolkit: Literature Edition
Introduction
Critique, the examination or analysis of a work of art (in our case, a written work of course), can be an enjoyable, educational experience for both the critic and the author. If that sounds like something a teacher would say to you about a subject that makes you alternately fall asleep or want to throw up, don't despair, because it can actually be a great experience. You just need some tools to help you.
Technical
The main component to many critiques of beginner's work tends to be technical. This can be as basic as misspellings and punctuation errors,




Childhood is Serious Business It's unnervingChildhood is Serious Business by *Kneeling-Glory
to pardon
a point of
abbreviated
generation
there is some
wonder
the young
cannot burn away
our culture says
rethink
your child
it starts in the home
words are a warning
your heart
will give out


There Are Always Alternatives I looked up the synonyms -There Are Always Alternatives by *Kneeling-Glory
pang, throb, anguish, misery
none quite adequate
affliction is closer, better defined
providing shape to the problem
psychologists don't want to solve
because, as popular opinion holds,
grief is precious, makes us human
and we can't dull it away
can't forget to mark the movement of planets
in a universe lacking pertinence,
can't smash all the clocks to avoid
that truculent ticking
no, the psychologists say,
we must suffer through it
must bear the herculean weight
with neither pills nor promise of relief
so we seek comfort in Johnny
or Jack or Jose, sometimes
a Captain named Morgan
we pretend the bottle necks
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